Zombie Attack!!!!!

A classroom assignment was given to me and a group of my friends that are in my class. We had to write a story and pass it to a group member. Every time that it is passed, I will show it by making it bold or not bold (switching off). Here is the story:

Zombie Attack!!!!!

“Zombies will rule”, “Zombies will rule” is what they chant. They haunt the very upsetting Plackzo Street in the graveyard. They are out to kill all. They don’t have brains–all but their leader. The zombie’s king is called Zork. He tells them what to do for he has the brain. Their order: to kill all and spare no lives of anyone. One night, while the band of zombies went on a mission to attach a hotel, they found an unexpected guest. When they carved a hole into the roof and jumped in, they were shocked. It was Hitler himself, the sworn enemy of the zombies. So, they fought with their evil zombie powers. Or did they have evil zombie powers? So, they tried to eat Hitler. But Hitler was too strong one zombie ate his head, “Ow” one zombie said. So they all went into the hotel and stole all of the precious items and the money. Poor Hitler. The only threat of the evil zombies is dead, or is he? Yes, he’s dead. The zombies went back to Zork to tell him the good news, but when they got back, Zork wasn’t there, but his mother-in-law was. THey heard her yelling at a dark mysterious figure. It was Zork! They tried to defeat the mother-in-law to save Zork, and before the figure, Zork, could say “Stop”, they ate the mother-in-law. Zork was feeling mentally challenged at the moment and clapped his hands in joy. “Yeh, now no one will spy on me and my girlfriend when we are on a date Yippee!” The zombies ran away before Zork figured out what happened. The zombies all hit a wall and died. The devastated Zork found his real mom and he and his girlfriend got married. They all died happily never after. THE END.

O.K. I know that their were a lot of grammar errors in that but you gotta admit: that was a good story. Tell me what you thought about it in the comments section. Thank you for reaing my story (if you really did…) COMMENT!!!!!